Final Feedback Sheets

In order to complete my final piece I need to refine my cuts, sync up any out of place lip syncing and sort out the green screen

Final Feedback Sheets from Synflame

New Music Video

I have followed the feedback and attempted to fix my music video. Some of the lip syncing is still off, I think I need to add additional 'weird'/surreal shots and finalise some of the cuts.

Feedback for Music Video

Music Video Feedback from Synflame

Music Video Feedback

I agree with some of the comments. I need to rearrange for the performance aspect of the music video. The vocalist of the video needs to make more of aggressive performance. Perhaps I should add an affect to the video the make the narrative side of the video to seem more creepy. In terms of editing I need to make the pace of the edit much shorter and introduce the narrative earlier on the video. I also need to show more of Terry in the video as he is only featured a few times. I need to sort out the ratio aspect of the video as when it is shown in youtube it looks weird.

Blog Feedback

To do:

1. Change shooting schedule
2. Peel back on digipak - make it more obvious
3. Play around with the date on the poster
4. More location shots
5. Put up the storyboards
6. Make sure I have and are using the labels: Research; Planning; Construction
7. More Video Analysis
8. Commentaries on influences
9. Rethink some images for digipak
10. Work on layout of blog

Recorded Feedback

This is  the recorded feedback given to me by my teacher.





To Do:

• Poster plan layout (to go with the digipak)
• Production Log
• Conventions of a digipak
• Decide the Bonus feature of Digipak
• Turn photos into digital brainstorm
• Pitch powerpoint
• Edit photos