Music Video Feedback

I agree with some of the comments. I need to rearrange for the performance aspect of the music video. The vocalist of the video needs to make more of aggressive performance. Perhaps I should add an affect to the video the make the narrative side of the video to seem more creepy. In terms of editing I need to make the pace of the edit much shorter and introduce the narrative earlier on the video. I also need to show more of Terry in the video as he is only featured a few times. I need to sort out the ratio aspect of the video as when it is shown in youtube it looks weird.